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Wednesday, August 3, 2016

Simile poem

I am Bridget


Quick as a rat
Slow as a sloth
Large as a bunny
Happy as a bouncing bunny
Sad as a bunny left on the side of the road in a box
Nice as a friend
Strong as a elephant  
Brave as a wolf
Busy as a cheetah

                          Put it all together and you’ve got Bridget

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  1. Allan RobertsonAugust 6, 2016 at 10:33 AM

    Oh that would be sad if someone left a bunny on the side of the road in a box. That is a very imaginative simile and it took me completely by surprise.

    It is very interesting to read about how you picture yourself Bridget. Do you have more features to add?

    I look forward to your next blog post.

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  2. AnonymousAugust 19, 2016 at 10:37 AM

    Hi there, my name is Emma and I am a student in room 5 at Awahono School. I really like your Simile poem. It made me think of what you would look like. What is your favourite thing to do at school?

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