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Friday, June 29, 2018

Newspaper Report

Hi, there this is my newspaper report I hope that it is not boring and not scary for you. Please, can you give me feedback on structure thanks? Hope you enjoy.
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  1. AnonymousJuly 2, 2018 at 9:19 AM

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  2. AnonymousJuly 2, 2018 at 9:20 AM


    Hey there Bridget, its me Parwin!
    I love your newspaper report that you have made because it was interesting and cool how you added a phone number too. I tried to make my report about an animal but it didn't work well so I didn't do an animal and did it based on a book instead. Maybe next time you could check your grammar and by the way, when you put a comma you have to press space and then type! But you still did an amazing report!


    Looking forward to next posts,
    Parwin

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    1. AnonymousJuly 2, 2018 at 9:49 AM

      Hi Parwin, Thank you for your comment I realy appreciate your comment I will go and fix the things that I need to but thank you again.

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