This week we have been working on writing narrative's this is the start of my edited narrative it is not as good as Maddie's writing. I am really good at the story writing thing, but not so good at other writing. Speeches, stories and all that type of thing I can do quite well but not so much the other stuff. Sorry f I am talking to much and u are getting board Here is Maddie's blog
Please comment on what I can improve.
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