Hey Bridget! Its Nikita, From Your class Rimu, I just want to say I love all this creativity you've given your readers, for them to see what their thoughts are, but I do think you should add more writing about, what this is for? why your doing it? and explain it. Other than that I mostly enjoyed it & hope you could use these kinds of things to improve on your next post!
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Hey Bridget!
ReplyDeleteIts Nikita, From Your class Rimu, I just want to say I love all this creativity you've given your readers, for them to see what their thoughts are, but I do think you should add more writing about, what this is for? why your doing it? and explain it. Other than that I mostly enjoyed it & hope you could use these kinds of things to improve on your next post!
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