This long write has to have 300 words.
I had got the word count and this story is about a little poor girl.
I got a little bit cheeky and I didnt finish it yet but I will do the published version soon.
Here is a screenshot of my wirting.
After a while it was lunch Amelia quickly ate up so she could go see her granny and tell her the
I had got the word count and this story is about a little poor girl.
I got a little bit cheeky and I didnt finish it yet but I will do the published version soon.
Here is a screenshot of my wirting.
Once upon a time there lived a poor girl. She really really wants too go to school. But her parents
can not afford her going too school. The little girl's name is Katelyn but Katelyn was never happy
when someone called her Katelyn. She HATED it she would get furious when ever she heard
someone say her name. Her parents found out how much she hated her name so they decided too
call her kate. But the little girl did not like that name either so this time when they called her kate she
would scream and cry.
Eventually her parents had tried 5 different names Katelyn, Kate, Julie, Lila and Mia. But none of
them had worked so they decided to let her choose. So she chose Amelia her parents were
surprised.
After a while it was lunch Amelia quickly ate up so she could go see her granny and tell her the
exciting news. Once Amelia had fished her lunch she packed her grannys lunch then ran. She
sprinted out the door then slowed to a walk.
A few minutes later she was in the forest she was almost at her granny's house. When she realised
that she had forgotten the bread.
Amelia decided that she would just tell her granny and say that she forgot the bread. Amelia knew
that her granny would never care. One time Amelia had forgotten to pack the food and just brought
the basket. Amelia had a thought and wondered if granny would care about her changing her name.
Well there was no time too worry about that now because she was there.
Amelia knocked on the door and sung Knock Knock open up. Normally the doo would be wide open
so she was scared. So she sang Knock Knock open up in her softest voice.
Amelia knocked and sang again and again until she opened it. Amiela gave up knocking so she just
opened it.
Her granny was not there the room was silent not one movement at all…
AHHH Nooo
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