Long write about flowers!

Hello Bloggers, 

Welcome to my blog.

Today I am blogging about my long write that I did today.

Once we had wrote out long write we had to buddy up into editting buddies. 

So I did my buddy is Gracie You should check her blog out.

Gracies blog

Once we had buddied up we had to chek each others writing and mark it.

Like the teachers do with our writing.

I will share with you my writing and my marks.

The day has ended the night has started. With all my hope I hope too have a good dream.

Suddenly I am in this place that smells like roses not knowing where I am, I try to figure out a way too escape this random field of…. Oh, I just  realised this is not a bad place. I settle down to this big bed of flowers trying not to squish any, tulips my favorite flower. Realising how many tulips there were I started too run brushing my hands gently across the slightly fluffy but soft. The satisfying flowers only just reaching my finger tips. Slowing down for a break I had come to an even bigger bed of flowers not just one colour of flowers but five differently individual  colours.  

At that point I could smell the smell the luscious smell of tulips blooming in the summer.

When I looked back behind me I could see the tulip petals slowly fluttering round in circles down too settle on the tips of the flowers.

I start too skip too the windmills and on my way there I s at each colour and picked a couple of flowers from each colour. When I got too the wind mills I realised that this was a place that people have visited quite often. I can tell that by all the engraved names on bacilly every windmill. 

I started too walk past all the windmills I realise that there is one windmill that only has one name on it. Where every other windmill has at least 25 too 30 names on each one.

I can tell that she has tried to put her name on the other windmills.

That was my long write and now I will give you my marks.

Ideas:R5

Structure & Language:R5

Orginisation:R5

Vocab:R4

Sentance Structure:R4

Punctuation:R6

Those are my marks.

Bye for now.