Hello bloggers,
Today/ This week I am doing my home learning blog.
This is what I have to do.
At the end can you please comment down below if I have
done all of that.
THANKS!!!
So Now here is my poem.
With the days coming and going
all so fast.
We're all getting older wiser,
and more mature.
If we cold all just brighten up a bit
the word might change too.
So you all know how I feel,
you might too.
So go on go spread the word!!!
How did I do Comment below.
Do you think that I completed all of
the set work properly
HI Bridget!
ReplyDeleteI'm Bethan from Pt England
I really liked your poem. It was very thoughtful.
I like the sentence: If we could all just brighten up a bit the world might just change too.
Maybe later on you could proofread your work and make sure it's got perfect punctuation.
Cheers
Bethan