A big problem
Once upon a time there was a Detective and a fairy crew. The Detective lived in a pirate ship made out of wood. The fairy lived in a big mushroom. With white spots and red all over. One day the Detective found a spooky rat as big as a kitten. And as poisenous as can be. The Detective sets out on a Journey. The Detective found a magic pencil. However the magic pencil goes wild and the Detective drops the pencil and walks away . The pencil was the fairy’s and without the pencil the fairies can’t fly. The Detective found the fairies cottage the fairies got cooked for lunch because the Detective had no lunch for 2 week’s.
THE END the next story comming soon.
Miss G here!
ReplyDeleteWhat a fabulous story you've got here Bridget. It is very creative and you have used many adjectives (describing words). $100 for you :)
What am amazingly imaginative story. i hope that not all fairies meet such an awful end. I know all about 'spooky rats' as I have seen them in Kauri. I am really looking forward to the next story which I see is coming soon.
ReplyDeletehi bridget i liked your story
ReplyDeletei liked the detective how did
the detective get the magic pencil
back to the fairies and i think for your next story it be more eksing
hi bridget i liked your story
ReplyDeletei liked the detective how did
the detective get the magic pencil
back to the fairies and i think for your next story it be more eksing
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