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Wednesday, June 29, 2016

poem

Bunny’s


Eating       loudly   


Playing   roughly


Sleeping   cutely


Playfighting harmfully

Junping   highly  


Drinking  noisily


Pooping disgustingly
    


Bunny’s are cute

5 comments:

  1. nice work on your poem bridget you have worked so hard on it you got a cute bunny for it and you have got alot of wrods

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  2. nice work on your poem bridget you have worked so hard on it you got a cute bunny for it and you have got alot of wrods

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  5. Hi my name is Abby. Nice work on your poem bridget . You have worked so hard on it. You got a cute bunny for it you also have got a lot of information about bunnies and rabbits. You should make it longer.Make the picture smaller.Also you should say why you made this poem and say the name of your poem like bunny poem or bunny’s are awesome.

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