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Thursday, June 8, 2017

E-astel story

  • This moring we did a writing e-astle test and here is mine
  • Once upon a time there was a haunted house. At noon there always was a coloured sky at noon . And that was when the ghosts came out to rob houses and  this time it was my turn  but i did not know and i heard whispers in the bathroom so I whent down there to have a look. and there was noone there so I whent back to the lounge and i trained on the lights to get some food because I was hungry.    

Eventually eggs started to boiled. Within minutes the whisper got louder some ghosts were distracting the lady and the other ones were robbing all the jews from the huge humongous jint glass coubid which was full of diamonds and jewels that are any colour from the rainbow. and then she thought that it was a bit dark and scary so she trined on the lights and every and all ghosts were gone so she sat down and enjoyed the rest of the night eating chips and drinking fizzy and she lived happily ever after.

                            {THE END}





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  2. Kia ora Bridget My name is Zyah from Grey Main School, Mamaku 1 and I have just looked at your blog and I wanted to comment on it. I like how your made that e astell story I also like the rainmaker and the short clip. In your challenge you could put more information in it, but it is still really great! I have got some questions for you. What is your favourite sport? My favourite sport is gymnastics and netball. What is your favourite colour? My favourite colour is blue and light green. Tino pai from Zyah

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