Narrative

Hello Bloggers, 

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Its me again today I am blogging about my Narrative, that I wrote today.
The writing prompt I choose today was... "Write about an animal that causes a huge problem.

If you think that there is something missing like any punctuation or words that don't make sense be sure to tell me that in the comments. 

Here is the beginning of my Narrative.

Good night Charlie. Said John. Charlie the parrot replied with a very happy good night. Why are you so happy? Said John. No reason replied Charlie. John moved onto the next cage. This cage has Gorillas. These gorillas are very friendly. The gorilla keeper sometimes has cuddles with them if they are sad or even if they just want a cuddle. John kept on practically walking the whole zoo. Just checking that their cages were locked. We don't want them escaping. That would just be crazy if all the animals were running around the zoo. Finally John had checked all the cages where locked.

Just as John was walking towards the office too grab his bag too go home he heard a big thump. John turned too faced where that sound came from. John quickly ran back too scan the cages for anything. Charlie's cage door was wide open as well as the gorilla's cage. John saw that the gorillas were running next too the flying parrot. CHARLIE!!! John shouted. Suddenly John realised Charlie had a stick that was shaped as a key. That must have been why Charlie was so happy. 

John ran back inside and called for backup.

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I haven't quite finished it but anyway it is just the begginning

What do you think is going to happen next? 

Did you enjoy my Narrative?

Did you spot anything that you don't think was quite accurate? 

Bye for now until my next post.