Rainmaker

rainmaker

Once on a sandy beach. There was boats lots of boats. When I was walking along the beach I realized that there was no water. So I went to go find water. First I have to find something to get around in. So I go and have a little walk around. Suddenly I find an aeroplane a mini one.  So I hop in it and lift of. i am i the sky for once in my life . My dream was to fly. Now i just need to find the cloud and make it rain. suddenly there is 3 other planes attacking me randomly the bigger plane apers shooting the 3 planes in one shot and we were fighting over the one cloud until i had put my special water changer on it and then I got shot  


 when we wached the video the class only wached up to where the girl spots a cloud and then we whent away to plan out our writing. I red it through after I had finished writing.Here is the video.

Here is how I created my story

I planed it out on paper

Can I please have some feed back on what you think I could inprove on in a narritive.

The chellenge is on

In the holadays that is comming up. Nikoli and I  are going to do test kind of thing and we have to save up some money to get food and water and pay for all sorts of stuff and this is like the 40 hour famine not really like it. here are some slides with what we are doing it tells you more then I did.



Here is the slides that we qukly made.

My Holiday

In the Holiday I whent to  Twice and  once for shays brithday and then we whent to burger king and we had a ice cream sunday with some chips and a burger and after all that we whent back to shays house and had the frozen cake wich was hard to bite into and then we whent home.I had a play date  with Abby and we were going to have a sleep over but we did not.

My medal

New routine

This week we have got a new math routine and time table that wich you get to pick what and when you do stuff like math , narritive stroy , reading , blogger .This is an  exsarmpl of my math slides and my time table.

My Audience

We are learning to create a positive digital footprint.

We often share personal information when we are online. The people we share with could be our friends and family or people we don't know. 

E-astel story

• This moring we did a writing e-astle test and here is mine
• Once upon a time there was a haunted house. At noon there always was a coloured sky at noon . And that was when the ghosts came out to rob houses and  this time it was my turn  but i did not know and i heard whispers in the bathroom so I whent down there to have a look. and there was noone there so I whent back to the lounge and i trained on the lights to get some food because I was hungry.    

Eventually eggs started to boiled. Within minutes the whisper got louder some ghosts were distracting the lady and the other ones were robbing all the jews from the huge humongous jint glass coubid which was full of diamonds and jewels that are any colour from the rainbow. and then she thought that it was a bit dark and scary so she trined on the lights and every and all ghosts were gone so she sat down and enjoyed the rest of the night eating chips and drinking fizzy and she lived happily ever after.

                            {THE END}

superhero

This week  year 5 and 6 have been working on  superheros.And what you need to be one.

We are learning to create a positive digital footprint.

We often share personal information when we are online. The people we share with could be our friends and family or people we don't know. We need to make smart decisions about what personal information we share online.


Reflection

Maths this week 2x tabels

This week we have been learning our 2 times tables and our L.Os

Jamie duff

On Wednesday  jamie duff came to our school and we got to meet him .This is a silde about Jamie duff hope you enjoy

Embedded Clause

An Embedded Clause is a Subordinate Clause which comes between Commas inside a Main Clause.

Underline the Embedded Clauses in these sentences and circle the Relative Pronoun:

Kane,  who was trying to escape, was attacked by his nemesis.

Kane, who was trying to escape,

The robot, which was malfunctioning, flew away from the fight.

Add an Embedded Clause to these sentences:

The villain that tries to escape from the cave,but never got out from where he  was hiding behind the boxes.

The steel pipe which was wrapped around the man stuck

Now write your own sentences with Embedded Clauses:

The big jint that lives under the ground and when he walks around it shakes the ground.

The aliens who fly over and over again over our house 2047 all the time  

Being a Yaldhurst hero means

Being a Yaldhurst hero means  Healthy individuals, enthusiastic learners, responsible citizens and open minded explorers. The past week we have been re learning what it means to be a YMS hero. In this video we have been  healthy individuals around the classroom. Grace and Bridget were being rubbish pickerupers , Julia was being an English Teacher, Chloe was eating healthy food, Lauren was being a nice Chromebook helper.

Sailing

On Wednesday we went sailing and it was really cool but scary at the same time when we were out in the middle of the lake.

                                                                        On wednesday my class and I made vidos or slides about easy was to get around in your goole drive and here are sone tips on my one i did

Safety with Chromebooks