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Thursday, November 1, 2018

My writing what I have done well


I first rode about 2 ½ years ago. I fell off when I first ever rode since then I hated horses. But now I adore them. I have got my own horse now and I have improved lots. I find it funny that where I first rode we used to keep Isla’s ponies there. But now our ponies live in a different place. I think that I have stood out of my comfort zone lots of times. But if I didn't meet Jo my life would have been a lot more miserable. Just like this rainy day at school, I would be at the paddocks hugging my pony just sitting there brushing her. Carly is my pony's name. Carly and I have entered our first show about a month ago. Now I just need too improve my heels down and posting Carly is trotting and now I just need to get Carly to trot over the poles not jump. And I want to go too more pony clubs, shows and pony camp I do pony camp every holiday. GOAL  I want to learn to jump by the end of 2019.

I know that My writing is not too good but I tried. Please give feedback about what I can write I have improved my recount throughout the term by, trying to write more by trying not improving by much.

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