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Thursday, November 15, 2018

Free write

This week we only had 3 days of school so I dont realy have anything to tell you about. Here is my writing so far. I have not finished the story yet but here you go. I hope you can please give me some feed back on how I can improve. What do you think that the 3 friends will do next?
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  1. KaiaNovember 21, 2018 at 12:32 PM

    Hello Bridget

    I'm Kaia from Kawakawa primary school. I really like your piece of writing. Maybe next time you could add some photos to match your story?.

    Kind Regards
    Kaia

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    1. AnonymousNovember 29, 2018 at 9:26 AM

      Hi Kaia,
      Its Bridget Thank you for giving me feedback. I will try to find some pictures to go in the story.Thank you

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