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Tuesday, November 5, 2019

Homelearning what will we do today???

Hello bloggers,
Today/ This week I am doing my home learning blog.
This is what I have to do.
At the end can you please comment down below if I have 
done all of that.
THANKS!!!


So Now here is my poem.

With the days coming and going 
all so fast.
We're all getting older wiser, 
and more mature. 
If we cold all just brighten up a bit
 the word might change too.
So you all know how I feel,
you might too. 
So go on go spread the word!!!
                       
How did I do Comment below. 
Do you think that I completed all of 
the set work properly 

1 comment:

  1. HI Bridget!
    I'm Bethan from Pt England
    I really liked your poem. It was very thoughtful.
    I like the sentence: If we could all just brighten up a bit the world might just change too.
    Maybe later on you could proofread your work and make sure it's got perfect punctuation.
    Cheers
    Bethan

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